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# Content review: Developer note

> A rewrite of a developer note into customer-facing documentation.

<Card title="Problem statement" icon="search"> Review and edit the following rough draft written by a developer into user-facing documentation. Briefly explain three key changes you made and why.</Card>

## Original draft

Change Data Capture Stream Monitor allows \[VENDOR] customers to measure replication lag times for all their databases. This monitor fixes lag by automatically re-syncing records when they fall behind. You can use it for \[DB1], \[DB2], and \[DB3] connectors. The lag is visible in the \[VENDOR] Dashboard, and you can also get alerts when it crosses 10 seconds."

## Rewritten version

The Change Data Capture (CDC) Stream Monitor lets you track replication lag across all your databases from the \[VENDOR] Dashboard. When records fall behind, the monitor automatically triggers a resync to keep your data up to date. You can also set up alerts to notify you when lag exceeds 10 seconds.

Supported connectors:

* \[DB1]
* \[DB2]
* \[DB3]

## Three key changes

<Steps>
  <Step title="Fixed the voice">Changed *\[VENDOR] customers* to *you* to speak directly to the reader.</Step>
  <Step title="Reframed the value proposition">Changed *fixes lag* to *triggers a re-sync*. The original implied the monitor resolves the root cause of lag, which is misleading. The revised version with *automatically triggers a re-sync to keep your data up to date* accurately describes the behavior without overclaiming.</Step>
  <Step title="Corrected connector names">Corrected connector names and moved them to a bullet list for accuracy and readability.</Step>
</Steps>